Free write 1

My weakness  right now is the presentation. My part for the group is to present the introduction and I am a really s shind person also i don’t really know what our project is about. I know that it has to be a security camera and  all the space it  takes when the videos are saved and the bad quality.

Free write 2

So far I like the story even though I haven’t finished reading it since I forgot it was done over the break. I started reading it now, I like how it is going. Right now I know that the story is mostly about a girl and her parents. Also they talk about aliens and how they are on earth. I now that the daughter dies I still don’t know the reason.

Free write 3

Watches changed the world by making the day to day more easy. Back in time people used to use the sun as a guia to see what part of the day was, they used to draw a line in the sand and see where the sun moves to see if time has passed. Now with a watch/clock it is easier you just have to look at your wrist to see the time.

Free write 4

My weakness in my memo is my organization and getting more details about my topic. I also need to spend more time on it since I start late. I think that is why I need to find more details for my writing. I need to work more on adding more details and grammar when I write, also I need to use vocabulary words. And more importantly I need to finish writing my memo.

Free write 5

My weakness right now in my formal letter is that it is not finished and that I don’t know what are my plans for the future. I really don’t know what to write about in my formal letter. I try to organize my ideas but I think I am missing a lot of stuff in my writing. I think I have this problem because I didn’t planific my time and didn’t spend too much time on it. What I’m planning to write about is not really in the letter yet.